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We Are All Just Prisoners Here Of Our Own Device

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Post by Zepher Sun May 23, 2010 10:40 pm

Well, that's part of what gets you to keep reading, doesn't it? Are there more aliens? Where are they? Does the government want them? What for? Should we welcome them? Should we prepare for attack? Are we going there? Who knows?! (Hint: I DO!)
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Post by Rabid Squirrel Mon May 24, 2010 1:20 am

I love that last frame! Is that song where you got your inspiration for these comics? I can not wait for the next issues! Again, nice job Zeph!
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Post by eclipsegrafx Mon May 24, 2010 12:44 pm

Great job Z!

I by passed it the first time I saw it go up and decided to read it today. Out side of spelling/grammar errors this is very well written.

I mean the story line seems very thought out. I like it alot.
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Post by Alpha Beta Tue May 25, 2010 12:38 am

Zepher wrote:Well, that's part of what gets you to keep reading, doesn't it? Are there more aliens? Where are they? Does the government want them? What for? Should we welcome them? Should we prepare for attack? Are we going there? Who knows?! (Hint: I DO!)

Very nice Zeph, I greatly respect your skill of story telling and writing. You give us enough so that we can be satisfied, but you leave the true purpose of the story secret. So every little detail could be important from the mysterious Green to the fact that it is called the Jesus project. Smile Thumbs up
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Post by Zepher Tue May 25, 2010 2:37 am

Not every little detail. But most details.

And don't get silly now. I've hardly started the story, there is very little to praise so far!
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Post by Alpha Beta Wed May 26, 2010 12:16 am

Zepher wrote:Not every little detail. But most details.

And don't get silly now. I've hardly started the story, there is very little to praise so far!

That depends, if this is a mystery kind of story, than every detail could lead to solving it.
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Post by 80-0 Fri May 28, 2010 5:55 pm

I enjoyed the haunting little poem at the end; you're definitely coming around as a great comic-maker. Smile
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