We Are All Just Prisoners Here Of Our Own Device
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Re: We Are All Just Prisoners Here Of Our Own Device
Well, that's part of what gets you to keep reading, doesn't it? Are there more aliens? Where are they? Does the government want them? What for? Should we welcome them? Should we prepare for attack? Are we going there? Who knows?! (Hint: I DO!)
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I love that last frame! Is that song where you got your inspiration for these comics? I can not wait for the next issues! Again, nice job Zeph!
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Great job Z!
I by passed it the first time I saw it go up and decided to read it today. Out side of spelling/grammar errors this is very well written.
I mean the story line seems very thought out. I like it alot.
I by passed it the first time I saw it go up and decided to read it today. Out side of spelling/grammar errors this is very well written.
I mean the story line seems very thought out. I like it alot.
Re: We Are All Just Prisoners Here Of Our Own Device
Zepher wrote:Well, that's part of what gets you to keep reading, doesn't it? Are there more aliens? Where are they? Does the government want them? What for? Should we welcome them? Should we prepare for attack? Are we going there? Who knows?! (Hint: I DO!)
Very nice Zeph, I greatly respect your skill of story telling and writing. You give us enough so that we can be satisfied, but you leave the true purpose of the story secret. So every little detail could be important from the mysterious Green to the fact that it is called the Jesus project.
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Not every little detail. But most details.
And don't get silly now. I've hardly started the story, there is very little to praise so far!
And don't get silly now. I've hardly started the story, there is very little to praise so far!
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Zepher wrote:Not every little detail. But most details.
And don't get silly now. I've hardly started the story, there is very little to praise so far!
That depends, if this is a mystery kind of story, than every detail could lead to solving it.
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I enjoyed the haunting little poem at the end; you're definitely coming around as a great comic-maker.
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