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Requiem for Hope *UPDATED*

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Post by Phazezorz Thu Mar 03, 2011 8:49 pm

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And now for a flimsy Backstory!

'Requiem for Hope' was built as the final carrier shuttle to transport Humanity's last hope to the stars. After the recent realization of the fact that Earth was going to be destroyed (At least moreso than it had been, at that point), the surviving members went forth and created Requiem as their final solution to continuing the hope of the survival of the Human Race. The goal of the 'Requiem' project was simple: Find a secondary planet suitable for life and Spread Humanity's reach 'To the Stars'.


Inspired by MUSE's 'Exogenesis Symphony' and Peter Morris.


So, please, C&C is very much so appreciated.


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Post by Green Tee Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:34 pm

I really like the nose and cockpit- the greebling is fantastic. The wings seem a little chubby though, and I think if you elongated them about 4 studs outwards they'd be in proportion with the rest of the ship. I like the SNOT on the SNOT wings, very nice touch.
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Post by Halen Thu Mar 03, 2011 10:00 pm

Cockpit is freakin fantastic, love the way you framed the canopy in. Dig pretty much the whole thing and feel Peter's influence.
The only thing that bothers me is the 1x2 dk bley slopes on the wing with the cheese on top. IMO it just seems to interupt the flow of the wing.
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Post by Phazezorz Thu Mar 03, 2011 10:14 pm

Commander Halen wrote:Cockpit is freakin fantastic, love the way you framed the canopy in. Dig pretty much the whole thing and feel Peter's influence.
The only thing that bothers me is the 1x2 dk bley slopes on the wing with the cheese on top. IMO it just seems to interupt the flow of the wing.

Aye, I definitely see where you're coming from. That was mostly used to fill the gap (I used a technic 1x1 with pin hole there for the bottom landing gear). But I figure now I can remove it and have it be either a small vent or cap it off with a 1x1 stud.

@GTee: The wings are already about 5 studs long, any longer they'd probably sag. Plus, I like the shorter-wing approach to this, myself.
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Post by Green Tee Fri Mar 04, 2011 12:32 am

I see what you mean. On the note of the 1x2 slope and cheese, I think you could use the 1x1 bricks with the studs built on the sides, like the ones used in the guns on the new Slave I.
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Post by Sabarrus Fri Mar 04, 2011 1:05 am

This ship really caught my eye, I love the rugged look to it. Razz

I agree with the said comments about the slopes on the wings though. And yes, finding the pieces your looking for is half the battle. A toast!
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Post by Phazezorz Fri Mar 04, 2011 1:30 am

Sabarrus wrote:This ship really caught my eye, I love the rugged look to it. Razz

I agree with the said comments about the slopes on the wings though. And yes, finding the pieces your looking for is half the battle. A toast!

Aye, the slopes on the wings are gone and I made a few cosmetic changes, I'll update the picture shortly Wink
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Post by Troopa Daisy Fri Mar 04, 2011 2:40 am

Great job on this ship I just think the wings would look better if they were completely smooth (nothing on top) and instead of having a large block have it angle out so the wing tip edge has a smaller width than the part closer to the body. Wink
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Post by Halen Fri Mar 04, 2011 6:24 am

IMO switch out your 1x1 technic brick for one of these and put a 1x2 or 1x3 tile on top for some colour.

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Post by Phazezorz Fri Mar 04, 2011 6:33 am

Commander Halen wrote:IMO switch out your 1x1 technic brick for one of these and put a 1x2 or 1x3 tile on top for some colour.

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Aye, that's actually a great idea.

What color do you think you'd suggest for this?
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Post by Halen Fri Mar 04, 2011 6:36 am

Either something that pops like red maybe white. Or go the opposite route with the bleys and have it blend in.
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Post by 667thLegion Sat Mar 05, 2011 12:50 am

Very smexy! The wings look a little flimsy to me... I love the engines though! Wow this thing looks
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Post by Phazezorz Sat Mar 05, 2011 8:39 pm

Updated main post with new shots and gallery link (Plus small backstory) Wow this thing looks
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Post by TheMissingPiece Sat Mar 05, 2011 8:46 pm

Yummeh greebles. Wow this thing looks I like the overall design of the ship. It kinda reminds me of a bird or a starfighter from Star Fox.
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Post by Halen Sat Mar 05, 2011 10:30 pm

Phazezorz wrote:Updated main post with new shots and gallery link (Plus small backstory) Wow this thing looks

Oh yeah! Thats freakin hot. The red totally pops and the 2x2 tile angled on the wing makes for easy but excellent markings. Bravo!
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Post by Green Tee Sun Mar 06, 2011 2:04 pm

The awesomeness ship has landed. Shocked
Amazing job Phaze.
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Post by Rook Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:19 pm

Mmm. Nice and greebly for a small ship. Love
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Post by Zepher Sun Mar 13, 2011 1:40 am

Yum. The greebs give it a bit of a organic feel, like a squad sort of thing, and the front looks a bit like a face. I dig it.
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