The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Creator's Note

GIMP'ing was a pain. Thanks to Legorevo for bringing the Droideka Design here, thanks again!

Battle was pretty good...

Love the debris and all... but you do know they have the ellipse tool in GIMP right?

Yeah, I do. That's how I make the text.

I think your comics are getting a bit bland. (except for your droid destroyer) It is just a bunch of wrecked pieces with a gray droid bp vehicle. I know you love gimp, but try not to make it the center of your story....

I know, But there's not much you can do on Metalorn. Once we move on, they'll improve. Metalorn's just a wasteland, unless you want me to scrap almost all of my sets and place pieces from them there. In other words, just live with it. It'll change within a month, I plan to have the 44th move soon. Next time, I'll pick a marsh planet.

It's good, I just think the purpose of the comic was to show the droid technique.

What I meant about the ellipse tool Alpha is that you should have used it for the droideka's shield.

That was pretty cool! I like the ACT!

I agree, it is a bit bland... But Metalorn is bland!

Very good comic, why does Arth's life suck though?

He's a Jedi general... that's sorta his job...

Thunder-blade wrote:He's a Jedi general... that's sorta his job...

But man, he lost his padawan, and then he gets shot?!

And I thought Seph had a bad enough life by losing his arm...

Nice one! My only criticism is the skakoan's head - it really should be green. Oh, and how did you do the shielding effects?

He just use a circle and gave it a color balance...

Also, this is the last of my MOCs for Metalorn. Joe is doing the last MOC on Metalorn, it will be good.

Theese metalorn assaults are pretty good.

commanderbly42 wrote:Nice one! My only criticism is the skakoan's head - it really should be green. Oh, and how did you do the shielding effects?

Not really; not all Skakoans are green. The 'head' is just a leather-like covering over the weaker inside-head which can't survive in a basic gravity-controlled environment.

So maybe this one isn't exactly Wat Tambor's best buddy and doesen't want to look like him.

Jedi Joe wrote:I agree, it is a bit bland... But Metalorn is bland!

Very good comic, why does Arth's life suck though?

Yeah, he gets injured loads. I like the comic lots.