541st Chronicles #10: Disabled Defenses
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541st Chronicles #10: Disabled Defenses
Yes, I know it's pretty bad (gah, just aweful in fact) in comparison to my other ones, but the next one will be a helluva lot better . A little rusty on the sizing and posistioning, and haven't had a lot of time to build a more comprehensive set. But bear with me .
Since it's been a while: Previous Comic .
Since it's been a while: Previous Comic .
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Wow, that was really great. A little more white bricks would be good.
Commander Mongoose- Guild Member
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Awesome. I like the gun at the beginning of the story, but I think it needs a few more slopes/greebles. The droid with the jetpack and gun on his arm was sweet too. Did you have to cut or mod the arm to enable the technic pin to fit on?
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legorevolution wrote: Did you have to cut or mod the arm to enable the technic pin to fit on?
I did have to cut the arm, but that arm was broken prior to that anyways .
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Sialboats wrote:legorevolution wrote: Did you have to cut or mod the arm to enable the technic pin to fit on?
I did have to cut the arm, but that arm was broken prior to that anyways .
I guess that can justify that then. The arm would just have to be thrown out anyways. Looks good.
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This one was a let down from your others. There was no meat to the battle. I liked the first four, they lead into eachother. Try that again. I'd also love to see the troop that landed in one of them as a third character, the guy in yellow, you know?
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Zepher wrote:I'd also love to see the troop that landed in one of them as a third character, the guy in yellow, you know?
He is a third character, in fact. Although I really haven't had much of a chance to elaborate on him... planning to do some of that with this next one. Character progression, and the introduction of the Seps .
But, I just needed to tie up the battle real quickly. Time's been scarce lately .
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It's nice, although the pictures are too big again ( ) The text on the last one disappears.
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Awsome, great setting and effects I can't wait to see more.
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Very good, the setting and the effects were great as normal. Keep up the great work.
thunder-clone- Non-Guild Member
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Re: 541st Chronicles #10: Disabled Defenses
Very good, the setting and the effects were great as normal. Keep up the great work.
thunder-clone- Non-Guild Member
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