83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

If you are wondering, no, I didn't try very hard on this one...

Adi-Ku Akatu Has landed on Raxus Prime...








This is the shortest comic I have ever done...

And you wonder why everyone left the Republic, just look at their manners!!!

And that MOC...

If you didn't try very hard at it, then why did you post it? And if it's the shortest comic you've ever done, is that possibly why it's also your first one? I would improve this drasticly or the CABG Council might come after you.

Clonecommando007 wrote:And you wonder why everyone left the Republic, just look at their manners!!!

And that MOC...

If you didn't try very hard at it, then why did you post it? And if it's the shortest comic you've ever done, is that possibly why it's also your first one? I would improve this drasticly or the CABG Council might come after you.

Can the Concil kick you out of the Guild CC?

The CABG Council can approve you into the Guild, or kick you out.

Clonecommando007 wrote:And you wonder why everyone left the Republic, just look at their manners!!!

And that MOC...

If you didn't try very hard at it, then why did you post it? And if it's the shortest comic you've ever done, is that possibly why it's also your first one? I would improve this drasticly or the CABG Council might come after you.

I expected someone would say that... But don't forget... This is only the begining...

I'm sorry? This is just a pile of yellow bricks and two figs stuck on a baseplate!

Clonecommando007 wrote:The CABG Council can approve you into the Guild, or kick you out.

Now I'm worried! Well I do try though on my Mocs just don't make them that fast like other people.....

Wow... this is just such a bad MOC. Looks like a pile of yellow bricks on a plate to me. Oh, and some minifigs...

Well, in the interest of improving it...

Lots more bricks, make the walkway a little wider so there's more elbow room, and maybe make it walled.

And try for some angled photowork.

I'd also try and make the interior a little more decorated.

Plus I'd make the dialogue a little more interesting.

You don't say 'GET OUT NOW' to a Jedi and expect him to leave without getting a lightsaber pressed to your neck.

It needs some work... the angle shots are all the same, and it looks nicer if you switch them up a bit!

Also, the MOC is kinda bland... try adding more and making it more detailed!

Ok no offense but that was just.... but you did say it wasn't your best, but at least you tried.

No offence but this is very sad. Please work harder on your mocs and make them a little bigger....

Clonecommando007 wrote:The CABG Council can approve you into the Guild, or kick you out.

Ooh, I never knew we about that perk! Who to start with...

Anyway - boring MOC, boring comic. Hell, I wouldn't even go so far as to say it was a MOC or a comic. There's simply nothing good about it. And while I'm here, I may as well point out that Raxus Prime was already a Seperatist-aligned world before the Clone Wars, as the CIS was founded there by Count Dooku. The Jedi in this should have already known that, so he's clearly an incompetent boob.

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Ooh, I never knew we about that perk! Who to start with...

Not me of coarse! Well, this MOC is an *ahem* EPIC PHAIL. Well, you could of just had it on one little baseplate!

You didn't try very hard...?


YOU DIDN'T TRY AT ALL !



Good god, if you're going to rip off my name, at least slap the title to something good .

cln-cmndo wrote:MOD/ADMIN, PLEASE DELETE THIS TOPIC!

good idea mate .

If I were you I would do a V2 on this and do your homework about Raxus Prime. and have boba Fett watching this in V2.

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Can I make one more pun please?

Commander Mongoose wrote:Can I make one more pun please?

do it right now before adim gets on .

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*Ahem*
83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Mocotioation

Commander Mongoose wrote:*Ahem*
83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Mocotioation

Yeah I was thinking:

83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Epic fail Mocing!

I didn't say anything because he is a new gu...Plus I cant see his pics, but what from everyone is saying...its bad....

Is this like from star wars the clone wars.

I really don't know what your grammar teacher taught you. Asking questions with periods?!

Alpha wrote:I really don't know what your grammar teacher taught you. Asking questions with periods?!

And this is why we need education reform.... . Our children are growing up to be dumb-arses, their minds being reduced to pudding by comerical television and Snoop Dog. When watching gratiutious violence, comericals, fantasy, or listening to incomprehensible lyrics, the left hemisphere of the brain (the thinker) shuts down and you enter dream zone. Just look at a little kid watching cartoons. Most kids, unable to analyze what they're watching, just shut down, and develop a propensity to shut down whenever they don't understand. It then becomes a challenge to teach them aside from the fact that they're taught to hate school by the media.


Wait....

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Clonecommando007 wrote:And you wonder why everyone left the Republic, just look at their manners!!!

And that MOC...

If you didn't try very hard at it, then why did you post it? And if it's the shortest comic you've ever done, is that possibly why it's also your first one? I would improve this drastically or the CABG Council might come after you.

Did we give you membership? Ok line up the council for execution inspection.