83rd Chronicles 1: 6 Down, 1000s To Go.

by cln-cmndo Fri Nov 28, 2008 3:15 pm

If you remember my last comic, it was a piece of $#!%. Hola Wow!

This one WILL be better. Smile

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Hope you like it.

by DarthPineapple Fri Nov 28, 2008 3:57 pm

cln-cmndo wrote:If you remember my last comic, it was a piece of $#!%. Yes.

This one WILL be better. No, it isn't.

Hope you like it.No, I don't. The MOC sucks and so does the story. A clone forgets his mission? And the MOC is just a random pile of bricks...

by Sialboats Fri Nov 28, 2008 3:59 pm

Okay, an improvement over your last one... but it's a minor one Wink

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Tiny.

Really tiny.

No uniformity in color, no uniformity in the droids, bad GIMPing, bad MOC, bad lighting, bad background, bad story. And think up a different title!

by 80-0 Fri Nov 28, 2008 4:41 pm

There's too much crap in the way of the troops. Make it a more clear pathway and please add greebles to that wall, or SNOT, and make the whole shebang more studless.

And how do all those troops fit inside that little podwalker head?

by Jeremy012399 Fri Nov 28, 2008 5:21 pm

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:There's too much crap in the way of the troops. Make it a more clear pathway and please add greebles to that wall, or SNOT, and make the whole shebang more studless.

And how do all those troops fit inside that little podwalker head?

I do agree there is too much junk in the path I would suggest taking some out, then it would be better.

by Mike Fri Nov 28, 2008 6:00 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:
cln-cmndo wrote:If you remember my last comic, it was a piece of $#!%. Yes. Pretty much..

This one WILL be better. No, it isn't. I bet it will be...

Hope you like it.No, I don't. The MOC sucks and so does the story. A clone forgets his mission? And the MOC is just a random pile of bricks... I agree. Although a bit harsh...

What did the Admins tell you about that smiley? XD

I basicly agree, but why not tell him what to improve on?

For example: Make the pictures lighter, and use less colors.

by DarthPineapple Fri Nov 28, 2008 6:12 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:
cln-cmndo wrote:If you remember my last comic, it was a piece of $#!%. Yes. Pretty much..

This one WILL be better. No, it isn't. I bet it will be...

Hope you like it.No, I don't. The MOC sucks and so does the story. A clone forgets his mission? And the MOC is just a random pile of bricks... I agree. Although a bit harsh...

What did the Admins tell you about that smiley? XD That I have to use it LESS often. LESS is NOT the same as ALL the time. So stop it!

by 80-0 Fri Nov 28, 2008 8:01 pm

I'd also question the quality of the troopers.

If this was a humor vignette the stupidity of the one with the snowtrooper helmet would be understood but this is war.

How do they not pick up the droids on their sensors?

How do they not see where the droids are hiding? How is it that whereever the droids are hiding the clones can't see them?

Kaminoans don't just let crappy troops slip out. That lad with the snowtrooper helmet would be terminated. Sad

Sigh.

Oh well. Now your 'nette depressed me.

by Thunder-blade Fri Nov 28, 2008 8:02 pm

Yeah... this isn't that much better than the first...

I think, that before you get into comics, you need to work on your MOCing skills...

by thunder-clone Fri Nov 28, 2008 8:04 pm

It needs work, there is to much stuff in the way, but this is better than the last one.

by 80-0 Fri Nov 28, 2008 8:07 pm

thunder-clone wrote:It needs work, there is to much stuff in the way, but this is better than the last one.

Thanks for copying what I wrote. Roll Eyes

by legorevolution Fri Nov 28, 2008 8:16 pm

What everyone else is failing to realize CLN CMNDO is that you (obviously) are not as good at moccing as they are- yet. But with each try we see improvement even if it is minor. The best part of this vig in my opinion is that vehicle in the background, though it needs work as well. The legion and their colors is pretty cool, and again I ask those who previous posted didn't the troops on Mygeeto have similar colors as well as Galactic Marines? The moc is pretty colorful but that can be fixed. I like the attempt a greebling though. It's a start and I give you props CLN.

by 80-0 Fri Nov 28, 2008 8:18 pm

Yeah; in my Dark Forces 2 vignette all my background is is a heap of Legos. Razz

by cln-cmndo Fri Nov 28, 2008 9:21 pm

Just wait untill after Christmas... Smile

by 80-0 Fri Nov 28, 2008 9:22 pm

cln-cmndo wrote:Just wait untill after Christmas...

Now THERE'S optimism if I've ever seen it!

by Thunder-blade Fri Nov 28, 2008 9:29 pm

What are you getting on Christmas that makes you so optimistic?? Smile

by cln-cmndo Fri Nov 28, 2008 11:43 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:What are you getting on Christmas that makes you so optimistic??

You'll see...I have no idea why I put this in here... Huh? Dancing lock?

and no, the lock does NOT mean "Lock this topic"...I just like locks... Razz

by Clonecommando007 Sat Nov 29, 2008 7:55 pm

I unlocked the topic. Not sure why it was locked.

Cln, I would post some of your work in the Hospital. You seem to be very optimistic and really want to do this well, but right now, you need more work. I hope we can help you out with some of that. Smile

by Rook Mon Dec 01, 2008 2:53 am

cln-cmndo wrote:
Thunder-blade wrote:What are you getting on Christmas that makes you so optimistic??

You'll see...I have no idea why I put this in here... and no, the lock does NOT mean "Lock this topic"...I just like locks...

This post looks a lot like a bump. Call it that. Wink

by Zepher Mon Dec 01, 2008 2:59 am

Oh, sure Rook, comment on his comic and not mine. Thanks bud.

by Thunder-blade Mon Dec 01, 2008 3:00 am

You guys are too funny sometimes... Wink

by ARC CloneTrooper141 Mon Dec 01, 2008 3:18 am

Yikes. Well.....uh.....maybe you should try something else? Like minifig customizing? I'm not so good at mocing myself, but i'm sure good at making sticker decals! Razz

But if you want to stick with mocing, just ask us fellow CABG members for some helpful tips. That's what we're here for! Wink

by Rookie627 Mon Dec 01, 2008 3:23 am

I think alot of your clone troopers are customized well,
but your MOC is to busy .Take a couple of those objects away,
and it will look much better. Marine

by Captian Roc Thu Jan 01, 2009 3:03 pm

cln-cmndo wrote:Just wait untill after Christmas...

This is what I was talking about having a bigger army Blue Arc

by Clonecommando007 Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:00 pm

Captian Roc wrote:
cln-cmndo wrote:Just wait untill after Christmas...

This is what I was talking about having a bigger army

If you bump an old topic, please add something constructive. Smile

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