Re: The 27th Journals #1

by Igor7 Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:01 pm

That's a good start, although I will say, as its been pointed out, this isn't the best MOC. It's still a great attemp for a comic, especially the first comic about your legion.

by Commander jake Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:30 pm

it was alright u need to put things on the table

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by 80-0 Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:32 pm

Commander jake wrote:it was alright u need to put things on the table

Welcome to the CABG! I ought to just tell you you should work on your grammar, punctuation, and spelling, plus read the Guild Constitution; once you've done those you should do fine here. Smile

by clone trooper101 Sun Jan 11, 2009 6:56 pm

I liked it, the scout commander thingy was a bit weid thought.
I thought the base would give out heat.

by Appo the clone Sun Jan 11, 2009 9:21 pm

Is the next one gonna have abattle

in it? Shocked

Im dieing to know Run away!

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by Thunder-blade Mon Jan 12, 2009 1:20 am

Not bad, it's a good start!

Can't wait to see more of them!

by pdragon27 Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:11 pm

The next one will be better now that I figured out Sialboats' explosion technique. He didn't tell me. I figured it out. I'm not telling anyone because I think he'll get mad.

by Commander Four Sat Jan 17, 2009 2:45 am

I don't like the Commando...you need to sand paper his fin not cut it...also it was a bit plain and why would the CIS need heat when the base would be already heated inside? And who sends only 3 troops to destroy a whole base!?

by ARC CloneTrooper141 Sat Jan 17, 2009 2:59 am

It's pretty good, but you could have added more, and you guys didn't have to start being all scientific and start bitching up on him... Laughing

by pdragon27 Sat Jan 17, 2009 1:43 pm

Commander Four wrote:I don't like the Commando...you need to sand paper his fin not cut it...also it was a bit plain and why would the CIS need heat when the base would be already heated inside? And who sends only 3 troops to destroy a whole base!?

HOLY CRAP! Did you even read the darn thing???? They are scouts! The heat from inside the base leaked out! And the commando's helmet was messed up anyway....

by Commander Four Sat Jan 17, 2009 2:25 pm

pdragon27 wrote:
Commander Four wrote:I don't like the Commando...you need to sand paper his fin not cut it...also it was a bit plain and why would the CIS need heat when the base would be already heated inside? And who sends only 3 troops to destroy a whole base!?

HOLY CRAP! Did you even read the darn thing???? They are scouts! The heat from inside the base leaked out! And the commando's helmet was messed up anyway....

I did and usually a base would be locked up pretty good...well the droids are stupid though. Razz

by The Jinja Ninja Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:45 pm

Commander Four wrote:I did and usually a base would be locked up pretty good...well the droids are stupid though.

Read up on convection - heat can get through locked doors. Razz

by pdragon27 Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:46 pm

Obviously he isn't past the 8th grade....

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