Episode 1: War

Season 1
Episode 1
"War"

See if you can spot any ghosts



































Enjoy

-Zeph

(Next episode will be more action packed, promise (In fact, it's almost all action, except... three slide?)

That looks nice, well done Zeph!
Oh, you got 2 of the same frame though.

Wow nice work. I like the story so far..is the flower trooper gonna be part of this?

Very well done Zeph! I am looking forward to the next ones!

Looks good Zeph!

The beginning is great! The introduction is very creative! Almost like a trailer!

One thing I'd change though is the font. It's kinda plain...

I feel like I've heard the beginning before....but where?

Pdragon wrote:I feel like I've heard the beginning before....but where?

I think the beginning of the song "pictures of you". Which BTW is a good song.

That was cool. It really puts you on the edge of you seat waiting for the next one.

"Old papa?"

No... I think it was a movie...

Pdragon wrote:No... I think it was a movie...

Ok then Transformers? I'll just keep guessing since I heard "pictures of you" and I saw Transfromers in the car for 5 hours there and another 5 hours on the way back!

Transformers? What are you talking about?I've seen that movie 1000's of times, and I didn't see any "pitcures of you" in it! By the way, the new transformers movie coming out is called "revenge of the fallen".

I spot those flowers. Anyways I like the beginning. Normally you prolong your plots but I like how it was to the point this time.

Aaarrggh. Zeph, please tell me where I've heard this. BTW, is the ghost the rat behind the Kuplo?

cc-117 wrote:Transformers? What are you talking about?I've seen that movie 1000's of times, and I didn't see any "pitcures of you" in it! By the way, the new transformres movie coming out is called "revenge of the fallen".

>.< thety are two differnt things I listened to "pictures of you" and differnt times then TRANDSFORMERS!

GUYS GET BACK ON TOPIC!

Good story Zeph!

Win.

Though it belongs in the Comics section.

Anyhow, the beginning was quite awesome, but the rest was just 'Ohsepztookplanetgogetdaplanetbackkkplzthx.'

Naw, JK, it was awesome.

yes, I agree. Very awesome. now if only i could get a hold of MY mom's camera...

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BTW, the ghosts are Marris Brook and Thomas Lane.

are they? I don't know who that is....

A nice little start-up , although you could have done better with effects on the opening screens .

cc-117 wrote:ok,ok...sorry dude...

I am not an admin but, better do punctuation right.

punctuation?what do you mean? I'm a level A+ in grammar, dude!

Admin - Yes, but, 5th grade grammar doesn't exactly match up to CABG level grammar. Banimated.

For what Kindergarten? The above state should read as such Genius:

Punctuation? What do you mean? I'm a level A+ in grammar, dude!

Thanks all, I'll move it Alfi, and yes, sometimes story are long winded Faie, but I'm jumping into this one!

cc-117 wrote:Punctuation? What do you mean? I have a A+ in grammar, dude!

HAH!

Grades mean nothing if you lack the inclination to make use of the subject matter that they are representative of your proficiency in.

Get out .

I know, right? What a waste of edumakayshun.

Loved the comic Zeph, great work! It's good to see them back again.

Sialboats wrote:Get out .

Look Mr. Sunshine, it's not you're job to say leave to another member. CC-117, you really should use correct grammar though otherwise...