Episode 1: War

Pdragon wrote:I know, right? What a waste of edumakayshun.

I need to sig that!

Nice comic, Zeph. Good to see P1 Old Papa!

Nice. I like the MOC. I can't wait for Episode 2!

I love the set, reminds me a little of the Jedi temple on Dantonie(spelling?) in KotoR.

great comic!

Thanks for the feedback Sial... oh... right... you just yelled at someone ;p

Thanks for the feedback Jens. You, for whatever reason, always make me really feel good about the comic. I guess you're just a good reviewer.

great job Zeph, as usual...

You already commented Gerrand, but thanks

And for those who were wondering where the opening was from on page one... i just made it up. Never heard it before! Sorry!

Well, for a setter-upper, it's pretty nice - good clear photography, nothing I can criticise there. Will any of the future comics give us a bit more background info on the characters, or will it all be BANG KILL DROIDS OH NO A CLONE DIED FEEL SORRY FOR HIM? A little character depth goes a long way, y'know...

Of course. Most main characters (That's right, main characters, not a squad of clones) backgrounds will be explained by questioning of other characters, while one will have a complex flashback story. Other very centric characters may also have flashbacks from time to time, but the main character will be the one with about 7, while other characters will probaly only have one top.

And i know character set up Jinj-e. I want to become a writer, and while you could tell me I'm screwed, I have read about writing a fair amount, and practiced a tad too.

Wow sweet Zeph, just like normal! More to come soon I hope!

Pretty good, but this is the beginning of the war and 'Old Papa' is already old?

This looks great... Ah the old Mace Windu face how I miss you...