Imperial Starcraft Carrier Hornet (Which Sucks)

Today I present to you the ISC Hornet. I built it last week, originally striving for a snubfighter, but came up with this. Anyhoo, enjoy. Comments and Constructive Criticism welcome!
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I must say that I'm not altogether impressed. This really does look like the black long nose of a snubfighter, with a relatively dull box for a hangar at the back. It has no sufficient weapons to speak of, and the shape of the starship comes to a very abrupt end at the back, geometry-wise.

Sorry dude, but it has no color and you can't really see what going on. Too plain for me.

It needs a little work, but keep trying.

Wait this is suppose to be a what?

What the heck is this? You should make it have a more geometrical feeling like CC007 wrote.

No I was saying what is it? Not what the heck. What I mean is, is it a starfighter or a capital ship?

It's a bit....flat. Or is it supposed to be like this? Try making a bigger bridge or something.

This just looks like a plate with some random bricks on it to me...

If you worked on it a little more, ditched the hangar, added a bridge and decked it out with guns(and maybe put the hangar on the bottom), you could make it The Eclipse.

80-0 wrote:If you worked on it a little more, ditched the hangar, added a bridge and decked it out with guns(and maybe put the hangar on the bottom), you could make it The Eclipse.

Which could be said of anything that's black and triangular. I'm gonna say DP got it in one: It's a couple of wing plates with random bits stuck on.

It entertains me how you try to mask the fact that you are agreeing with me with a joke.

JK!

Yeees... But it wasn't a joke, and I was primarily agreeing with DP. Besides, what is it in your world that makes agreeing with people so wrong?

Now now, it depends on recurrency.

But hey, we're off topic.

Interesting miniscale ship. I like the idea. It needs more detail and make sure you get the whole ship in the picture next time.

I see the concept you were trying to do, but the execution is meh...

Nothing too impressive here... I really don't know what could improve it.

This is seriously amazing. great work!

DarthARCTrooperCaptain wrote:This is seriously amazing. great work!

Eh?



I think it looks like garbage... it's a couple of plates with some simiarlly shaped bricks, and a sorry excuse for a hangar bay. There aren't even any retractable doors !

I agree with Sial, I mean what hangar is going to be open all the time?

Sialboats wrote:

DarthARCTrooperCaptain wrote:This is seriously amazing. great work!

Eh?

It's this new thing called 'sarcasm', not sure whether you've heard of it...

The Jinja Ninja wrote:

Sialboats wrote:

DarthARCTrooperCaptain wrote:This is seriously amazing. great work!

Eh?

It's this new thing called 'sarcasm', not sure whether you've heard of it...

'Sarcasm' doesn't translate well into written form and if you didn't know the person you'd think they're just another idiot.

Well, pretty much everything Juns says is sarcastic... At least I hope so.

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Well, pretty much everything Juns says is sarcastic... At least I hope so.

Two Words: Juns who?


Now, if I wanted to be sarcastic, I'd use extensive hyperbole to make my sentiments known to the most glorious and ever-admirable reciever of the sarcasm.

Wait... ...

Juns= Junsier from FBTB.

(I lurked awhile, so that's why I'm not confused )