541st Vendetta #5: Frustration

Yah, I've been spoling you all with 20 pane comics lately, haven't I? This ones' a bit smaller . Mind the postioning of some of the text bubbles, still trying to perfect height and alignment. Thought regardless of height, left-alignment would be read first... but, I thought wrong .

Not too bad. But ease off on cursing next time OK? I'm not really offended or anything, it just makes you sound like scummy bastard, you know what I mean?

firehawk302 wrote:Not too bad. But ease off on cursing next time OK? I'm not really offended or anything, it just makes you sound like scummy bastard, you know what I mean?

Well that's how Ied's batch instructor was . I wouldn't curse unless I wanted to make an impression, now would I ?

Wooh! Action!

That was awesome Sial! Effects were top-notch and the set design was perfect!

I absolutely LOVE that news on TV (holonet) effect!

firehawk302 wrote:Not too bad. But ease off on cursing next time OK? I'm not really offended or anything, it just makes you sound like scummy bastard, you know what I mean?

I hate these kind of uncivilized and unthought of text responses.

It's a BLOODY WARZONE!



Onto the comic, it was pretty daamn good, I see you've included your Battlefield entry, eh? I guess we'll be seeing more 815th officers...

Oh yeah, forgot to comment on the news thing. 'oh:

That was very cool and unexpected. Can someone translate all that?

Great job on the effects, and I like the joke about the public school! Did you use all GIMP for the news report? That was frakin' amazing!

Hehehe, its battle line Charlie, your battlefield entry, isn't it?
Great comic, I loved the holonet broadcast.

I really like the idea you had with the news station airing the CIS propoganda. Great job once again on the effects and *fake* lighting.

Pretty cool, Sial! This is becoming pretty good, we're finally getting some real action!

Although, why do all the major characters have a British accent?

Jedi Joe wrote:Pretty cool, Sial! This is becoming pretty good, we're finally getting some real action!

Although, why do all the major characters have a British accent?

Not all characters, do. It's mostly for realism. If the CO has a accent, and the clones are bred to learn quickly, they may learn the accents of those they associate with, if they haven't picked up a speech pattern already.

Ied = Scottish (from instructor).
Turaki = British (from family heritage)
Clones = Varies; some do, some don't. Those that do got it from Turaki
Equinox Commandos = Mostly American, few Asian.
Trek = British (from Turaki)
Captain McCulbert = American
Young Girl = American
Lieutenant Commander Amador = American

Well, almost all of them say bloody, but alot of English speaking Europeans do...

He he... I love the public school joke!

It wasn't intended as a joke , but rather a statement about what the clones have missed out in life, and how differently they've been affected by it.

When was the last time you've seen a thirty-fourty year old adult ready to kill because someone called them a bad name ?

I like the GIMPing the building and debris is cool as well. An average for your standard.

Great as always; I love the 'frustration' near the end... Nice title.

Awesome. Some of the pics are too big again, though.

Hey did any of you notice that this is his battlefield entry?

Matchstick wrote:Hey did any of you notice that this is his battlefield entry?

Well, I wouldn't've let it go to waste ! Put me behind a set for a comic....