Episode 8: The Invasion of Ingration Part 7: Chase

torrent3 wrote:I like it, but it's a little hard to understand the whole thing.

• Appearance. Some of your characters look so similar (Versilles and Gruff), and others look like they've been reused.
  
• Posing. You have most of your figs just toppled over, no actual expression. It also looks like their bodies are being piled over each other.
  
• Colors. You have red, yellow, green, and other colors. Firstly, you need to work on the city colors. I don't seem to recall a SW planet that's engaged in war with such bright colors, Coruscant's main color is gray, Nar Shaddaa's main color is tan, Tatooine's main color is dark tan. Red is too bright, and cities don't generally have bright colors, eh?
  
  Also, the color of your minifigs also matters. On Tatooine, they wear dark and tan clothes. Coruscant, is filled with dark clothes. You have green, white, dark red clothes. Most planets stick to a similar colored uniforms. Or as so I've seen.
  
• And most importantly, storyline. I fail to see the point of this whole operation, I know the main objective was to liberate the city, but why couldn't they've just done a full scale attack? You need a couple all out, FFA combat parts, and a couple story parts.
  

Alpha wrote:Very well then, and I'm still befuzzled as why Gruff and Versilles don Police Badges on their Jedi Robes.

True, there are colors of all sorts, but if you're using yellow as a skin color, make sure not to include any yellow buildings.

Sialboats wrote:Okay Zeph, I've got my share of problems with this .

Firstly, the chase scene between Kuplo, Gruff, and Vimpu really doesn't seem much like a chase. The motions of the minifigs just don't seem right. Crowd members aren't looking at them as the two enter the vision of each person, and the members of the chase aren't quite moving properly. You also noticed that you repeated the same frame two times over at the begining ?

I got that the figures didn't look good

Okay, the flashback is hard to notice on first pass, and I'm not too sure what it has to do with the current pursuit .

Okay. I'll play around with Flashbacks. I think all frames right before a Flash-back from now on will be washed out more.

I'm not sure why he says "Crink" when Vimpy pulls out the harpoon gun, and I'm sort of wondering wether or not there's a war going on with all these people (who are paying little attention to what's happening about them) standing about in prestine streets.

Becuase his arm got shot off?

Everything else, I think, has been covered already, and I look forward to you tying this plot up! Ingration sort of was bleh for me .

Zepher wrote: I got that the figures didn't look good

'kay! Posing is everything to me.

Okay. I'll play around with Flashbacks. I think all frames right before a Flash-back from now on will be washed out more.

Definately. Desaturate it, threshold it, color-balance it, I don't care, but you have to make the Flash-back distinguishable from the rest of the comic.

Becuase his arm got shot off?

REALLY !? Ah... oh, um.... I mean, of course his arm got shot off !

I don't know, if my arm got shot off, I'd let out a piercing scream of AGONY and drop to the floor in pain .