Episode 6: The Invasion of Ingration Part 5: Captured

Alpha wrote:Because Zeph just messaged me that his comic was up, and I bet he was going to say to comment...

Here I am. *Huffpuffcoughcough*


Anyways, onto the plot. It was good, though I was expecting to see a bit more action. Though I hate it how you use yellow heads, and blaster fire doesn't make you bleed. It doesn't tear you apart anyways.

Next one's mostly action. I like stories though.

As for the blood, everytime I do this I get the same response. But it's certainly much more fun making it gory, and it shows that they're really dead better. When Axel was hit by a blast in CC-007's comics I thought he had dodged it until C-007 said he was dead.

And I like gore

The flashback was good, but there wasn't anything to it. It was just Gruff trapped in a cage talking random gibberish about how the town and approves of Sh!t Won, but what relevance does that have to do with the present day?

That's Versilles. Go re-read the character guide, or previous episoes

Unless you're planning to go back in time again, and this is a setter-up...

Ding ding ding ding! We have a giant winner! Yeah, about 1/4th of this sieries will be various flash-backs of various characters. But this is the first one for Versilles, who is the main charcter and will have by far the most!

It just sounds like a random flashback, it'd be a bit more epic if it had to do with the death of someone important, or maybe discovering a plot to destroy the Jedi planet or something.

Zepher wrote:I liked the name Shi Wun beter, but the figure for Wi better

What would you like to see added to the story Superperson?

Zepher wrote:

Alpha wrote:Because Zeph just messaged me that his comic was up, and I bet he was going to say to comment...

Here I am. *Huffpuffcoughcough*


Anyways, onto the plot. It was good, though I was expecting to see a bit more action. Though I hate it how you use yellow heads, and blaster fire doesn't make you bleed. It doesn't tear you apart anyways.

Next one's mostly action. I like stories though.

As for the blood, everytime I do this I get the same response. But it's certainly much more fun making it gory, and it shows that they're really dead better. When Axel was hit by a blast in CC-007's comics I thought he had dodged it until C-007 said he was dead.

And I like gore

The flashback was good, but there wasn't anything to it. It was just Gruff trapped in a cage talking random gibberish about how the town and approves of Sh!t Won, but what relevance does that have to do with the present day?

That's Versilles. Go re-read the character guide, or previous episoes

Unless you're planning to go back in time again, and this is a setter-up...

Ding ding ding ding! We have a giant winner! Yeah, about 1/4th of this sieries will be various flash-backs of various characters. But this is the first one for Versilles, who is the main charcter and will have by far the most!

It just sounds like a random flashback, it'd be a bit more epic if it had to do with the death of someone important, or maybe discovering a plot to destroy the Jedi planet or something.