Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
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Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
Season 1
Episode 13
The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
Last Episode:
Lofsurra flashed back to finding Boom, while Clone Sir and Versilles talked.
Enjoy! I was happy to include AlphA in a comic! All credit for the orginal AlphA design goes to, of course, Alpha!
-Zepher
Episode 13
The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
Last Episode:
Lofsurra flashed back to finding Boom, while Clone Sir and Versilles talked.
Enjoy! I was happy to include AlphA in a comic! All credit for the orginal AlphA design goes to, of course, Alpha!
-Zepher
Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
Awesome! I love the way you included AlphA, and how we learn a bit more about Vimpu. Who are those guys with those space helmets? Some sort of polcie force?
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
So, a bunch of security plants a charge on a vehicle, it explodes, and AlphA 'bounty hunters' just run away and get choked to death? Though there should've been cratefulls of those plants, otherwise, you should just blow that thing to hell.
Nice flashback, though at the end, there could've been more to it rather than "I'm gonna get you off that rock, boy", maybe a line saying "I have a gunship and 2 fighter escorts on route, we're bringing in backup. ETA 1 hour." or something. But it was nice, the fire effect might've been a bit odd, but hey.
Nice flashback, though at the end, there could've been more to it rather than "I'm gonna get you off that rock, boy", maybe a line saying "I have a gunship and 2 fighter escorts on route, we're bringing in backup. ETA 1 hour." or something. But it was nice, the fire effect might've been a bit odd, but hey.
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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
-Aki- wrote:Awesome! I love the way you included AlphA, and how we learn a bit more about Vimpu. Who are those guys with those space helmets? Some sort of polcie force?
They're the rebels from the first and second flash back that Versille had. Here's the one with the Obi head!
Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
Splendid little comic, I appreciate how you're weaving together the various elements of CABG's factions into a story - so that we'll have a more coherent tale! My only complaint lies in the AlphA ship. It's a bit too much like the platform on which the police were standing. It was troublesome to differentiate between the two on my first read-through . And I do think you overdid that fire a little, but that's excusable .
Overall, a solid episode with no glaring errors .
Overall, a solid episode with no glaring errors .
Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
Clearly I need to work on my Photoshop skills or check GIMP 'cause that was nicely done.
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Well atleast we know why Versilles has the police torso.
Use a spell checker. --R
Use a spell checker. --R
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Location : why do you need to know? You an agent?
Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
One of my favorite episodes so far!
One problem, all the sets are so nice but then the frame with gruff is very plain, kinda ruins it me thinks.
One problem, all the sets are so nice but then the frame with gruff is very plain, kinda ruins it me thinks.
Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
Very nicely done! The inclusion of the AlphA is pretty cool, pretty nice GIMPing and it has a nice story behind it. Well done once again!
Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
why wrote:Well atleast we know why Versilles has the police torso.
Use a spell checker. --R
Very observant. It goes a little bit more into that later.
And Alpha, they're not security, they're rebels.
Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs
Next episode's going to take a while. Alpha has kindly agreed to do the lightsaber effects for me, but it could still take some work.
I'm also going to wait a while before doing me eisodes since I only have 3 normal PI clones.
I'm also going to wait a while before doing me eisodes since I only have 3 normal PI clones.
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