Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Zepher wrote:

1. What was your favorite episode in this story arc (episodes 10-14).
Err....The last one, we got a person to die. Kid
I liked the one with AlphA.

2. Could you name the main character's of this arc?
Furball

3. Would you be able to do a very basic recap of this story arc? Could you try to?
Err.People get on drug planet...flash backs about rebels and secret plans...furball dies...cry cry cry.

4. What do you want to see more of from now on?
BLOOD! kid
More of the grey sets.

Zepher wrote:

1. What was your favorite episode in this story arc (episodes 10-14).
I have to say, I really did enjoy this one.

2. Could you name the main character's of this arc?
Loshfurra (Or however it may be spelled)
Kuplo
Gruff
Sir
Versilles
Mr. Dark Jedi

3. Would you be able to do a very basic recap of this story arc? Could you try to?
Evacuation of Nekt, last gunship off planet's surface shot down, protagonists confronted by Mr. Dark Jedi. Escape the wrath of Mr. Dark Jedi by blowing themselves off a cliff, series of flashbacks detailing past experiences of protagonists. Rescue gunship arrives, duel, fin.

4. What do you want to see more of from now on?
Actual combat. It's Star WARS, after all. Finding a balance between plot and shooty-shooting-whiz-bangery is challenging (I still haven't worked it out), but it's something to think of! You don't necessarily have to show the SSWB-ry, but scenes and dialog which makes it feel as though there are cogs grinding in the larger War Machine would be a possibility . And a little contiguity of story. I remember a quote that "the best stories are told chronologically". Splitting the story all up by using flashbacks and different seasons is weakening your story some . Sometimes, it's good to be linear!

-Boat

Zepher wrote:

1. What was your favorite episode in this story arc (episodes 10-14).
This too, was probably my favourite.
2. Could you name the main character's of this arc?
Lofsurra, Kuplo, Gruff, Versilles and the Dark Jedi

3. Would you be able to do a very basic recap of this story arc? Could you try to?
Nekt is evac'd, last gunship is stopped by Dark Jedi, Good Jedi run away on Cliff, fall off cliff, make it back to gunship, wookie is killed. Several Flashbacks inbetween.

4. What do you want to see more of from now on?
No more police suits. These are Jedi. Please give them Robes. Oh, and you need to pick up a BP. Also, this planet was quite nice. Maybe you could try more Jungle atmospheres.

Happy?

Zepher wrote:Thanka Alpha, and you too Phima. you guys are another two who are constantly helpful. And yes, the next planet will be a large scale battle, but that's still a few comics away!