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83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

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83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by cln-cmndo on Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:14 pm

If you are wondering, no, I didn't try very hard on this one... Smile

Adi-Ku Akatu Has landed on Raxus Prime...








This is the shortest comic I have ever done... Hmm...
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Clonecommando007 on Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:20 pm

And you wonder why everyone left the Republic, just look at their manners!!!

And that MOC...

If you didn't try very hard at it, then why did you post it? And if it's the shortest comic you've ever done, is that possibly why it's also your first one? I would improve this drasticly or the CABG Council might come after you.

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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by flare on Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:22 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:And you wonder why everyone left the Republic, just look at their manners!!!

And that MOC...

If you didn't try very hard at it, then why did you post it? And if it's the shortest comic you've ever done, is that possibly why it's also your first one? I would improve this drasticly or the CABG Council might come after you.

Can the Concil kick you out of the Guild CC? Shocked
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Clonecommando007 on Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:23 pm

The CABG Council can approve you into the Guild, or kick you out.

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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by cln-cmndo on Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:23 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:And you wonder why everyone left the Republic, just look at their manners!!!

And that MOC...

If you didn't try very hard at it, then why did you post it? And if it's the shortest comic you've ever done, is that possibly why it's also your first one? I would improve this drasticly or the CABG Council might come after you.

I expected someone would say that... But don't forget... This is only the begining...
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Alpha on Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:25 pm

I'm sorry? This is just a pile of yellow bricks and two figs stuck on a baseplate! Surprised

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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by flare on Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:30 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:The CABG Council can approve you into the Guild, or kick you out.
Shocked Now I'm worried! Well I do try though on my Mocs just don't make them that fast like other people..... Surprised
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:03 pm

Wow... this is just such a bad MOC. Looks like a pile of yellow bricks on a plate to me. Oh, and some minifigs...
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by 80-0 on Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:40 pm

Well, in the interest of improving it...

Lots more bricks, make the walkway a little wider so there's more elbow room, and maybe make it walled.

And try for some angled photowork.

I'd also try and make the interior a little more decorated.

Plus I'd make the dialogue a little more interesting.

You don't say 'GET OUT NOW' to a Jedi and expect him to leave without getting a lightsaber pressed to your neck. Laughing

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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Nov 26, 2008 5:21 pm

It needs some work... the angle shots are all the same, and it looks nicer if you switch them up a bit!

Also, the MOC is kinda bland... try adding more and making it more detailed!
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Jeremy012399 on Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:23 pm

Ok no offense but that was just.... but you did say it wasn't your best, but at least you tried.

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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 on Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:34 pm

No offence but this is very sad. Please work harder on your mocs and make them a little bigger....
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:35 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:The CABG Council can approve you into the Guild, or kick you out.
Ooh, I never knew we about that perk! :grin: Who to start with...

Anyway - boring MOC, boring comic. Hell, I wouldn't even go so far as to say it was a MOC or a comic. There's simply nothing good about it. And while I'm here, I may as well point out that Raxus Prime was already a Seperatist-aligned world before the Clone Wars, as the CIS was founded there by Count Dooku. The Jedi in this should have already known that, so he's clearly an incompetent boob. Razz
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Commander Mongoose on Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:48 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Ooh, I never knew we about that perk! :grin: Who to start with...
Not me of coarse! Well, this MOC is an *ahem* EPIC PHAIL. Well, you could of just had it on one little baseplate!
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Sialboats on Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:52 pm

You didn't try very hard...?


YOU DIDN'T TRY AT ALL Run away! !



Good god, if you're going to rip off my name, at least slap the title to something good .
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by cln-cmndo on Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:58 pm

MOD/ADMIN, PLEASE DELETE THIS TOPIC!
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by flare on Wed Nov 26, 2008 9:01 pm

cln-cmndo wrote:MOD/ADMIN, PLEASE DELETE THIS TOPIC!

good idea mate Wink.

If I were you I would do a V2 on this and do your homework about Raxus Prime. and have boba Fett watching this in V2.

Please edit this post and use proper spelling, grammar, capitalization, & punctuation. Thanks. ADMIN

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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Commander Mongoose on Wed Nov 26, 2008 9:31 pm

Can I make one more pun please?
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by flare on Wed Nov 26, 2008 9:33 pm

Commander Mongoose wrote:Can I make one more pun please?

do it right now before adim gets on Wink .

Please edit this post and use proper spelling, grammar, capitalization, & punctuation. Thanks. ADMIN

Read this before posting again. http://www.thecabg.net/the-guild-constitution-f1/the-constitution-t1.htm#1

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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Commander Mongoose on Wed Nov 26, 2008 9:35 pm

*Ahem*
83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Mocotioation
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by flare on Wed Nov 26, 2008 9:36 pm

Commander Mongoose wrote:*Ahem*
83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Mocotioation

Yeah I was thinking:

83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Epic fail Mocing!

I didn't say anything because he is a new gu...Plus I cant see his pics, but what from everyone is saying...its bad....
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by vecol05 on Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:38 am

Is this like from star wars the clone wars.
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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Alpha on Thu Nov 27, 2008 7:00 am

I really don't know what your grammar teacher taught you. Asking questions with periods?! Laughing Roll Eyes

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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Sialboats on Thu Nov 27, 2008 12:08 pm

Alpha wrote:I really don't know what your grammar teacher taught you. Asking questions with periods?! Laughing Roll Eyes


And this is why we need education reform.... Wink . Our children are growing up to be dumb-arses, their minds being reduced to pudding by comerical television and Snoop Dog. When watching gratiutious violence, comericals, fantasy, or listening to incomprehensible lyrics, the left hemisphere of the brain (the thinker) shuts down and you enter dream zone. Just look at a little kid watching cartoons. Most kids, unable to analyze what they're watching, just shut down, and develop a propensity to shut down whenever they don't understand. It then becomes a challenge to teach them aside from the fact that they're taught to hate school by the media.


Wait....

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Re: 83rd Legion Chronicles 1: Failed Negotiations.

Post by Rook on Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:57 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:And you wonder why everyone left the Republic, just look at their manners!!!

And that MOC...

If you didn't try very hard at it, then why did you post it? And if it's the shortest comic you've ever done, is that possibly why it's also your first one? I would improve this drastically or the CABG Council might come after you.

Did we give you membership? Ok line up the council for execution inspection.

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