Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Since the 11th Episode is my half-way point in the first season ,and fairly long, I've decided to devide it into two parts!

Here's your first part!

























Hope you enjoyed! The second part whould be out in two days time.

-Zepher

Waaay too overdone on the blurs, and Boom was too close to the Sith to tell his troops not to engage, but other than that, the new character was interesting, though I was hoping to see more of Vimpu, but the crashed gunship was nice.

That Sith reminds me of the fellow in that KotOR video released recently. And what does that herb do again?

Oh, and never use the 'divide into 2 parts because it was too long/too exciting/too cliffhanger-y' excuse, we want to see the whole thing!

Lolwut?


The effects were overdone, it seemed too short and too hurried of a fight, and neither of the combatants used their primary weapon. The set was also a bit messy, and too cluttered for my tastes. I just wasn't impressed with this one, Zeph .

And isn't it odd how in the first and second picture I didn't notice the Dark Jedi at all? He would've cut those clones to bits and pieces, if he's as strong as he appears to be by the fourth picture.

How does he look like the Sith in The Old Republic trailer? This is a Givin Dark Jedi, and that sith had a mask.

Anyways, I didn't like it, As Sial and Alpha said, way overdone with the blurs, and the fight was, ehhhh, boring.

Blurs were bad, but I have a question. Why on Earth would there be less than five clones on the gunship? There are also no clones dead on the ground, so don't say the rest had died.

*Awkward* <.<

80-0 wrote:And isn't it odd how in the first and second picture I didn't notice the Dark Jedi at all? He would've cut those clones to bits and pieces, if he's as strong as he appears to be by the fourth picture.

There is a reason for that my good sir! This Dark Jedi enjoys taking things slow.

As for the clones Shade... they didn't come from the Gunship. You see, they were already there! The Gunship clones are dead, assumably.

As for the Blur. Ugh. Agree with all of you. I still haven't found a blur effect that I'm happy with.

The fire could use a slight blur. The story is tolerable, but those motion blur effects are awful! Please do something better next time!

Pretty good, but I think that the blur effect is used a bit too much. Though I like the action and the plot. I think it could have been a bit longer, but again very nicely done!

Great comic, thoroughly enjoyed it. And the effects were great. Awesome work my nemesis.