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Epsiode 11 - Part 1

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Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by Zepher on Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:00 pm

Since the 11th Episode is my half-way point in the first season ,and fairly long, I've decided to devide it into two parts!

Here's your first part!

























Hope you enjoyed! The second part whould be out in two days time.

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Re: Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by Alpha on Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:03 pm

Waaay too overdone on the blurs, and Boom was too close to the Sith to tell his troops not to engage, but other than that, the new character was interesting, though I was hoping to see more of Vimpu, but the crashed gunship was nice.

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Re: Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by 80-0 on Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:03 pm

That Sith reminds me of the fellow in that KotOR video released recently. And what does that herb do again?

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Re: Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by Alpha on Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:05 pm

Oh, and never use the 'divide into 2 parts because it was too long/too exciting/too cliffhanger-y' excuse, we want to see the whole thing! Wink Razz

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Re: Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by Sialboats on Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:07 pm

Lolwut?


The effects were overdone, it seemed too short and too hurried of a fight, and neither of the combatants used their primary weapon. The set was also a bit messy, and too cluttered for my tastes. I just wasn't impressed with this one, Zeph Waaa!.
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Re: Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by 80-0 on Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:18 pm

And isn't it odd how in the first and second picture I didn't notice the Dark Jedi at all? He would've cut those clones to bits and pieces, if he's as strong as he appears to be by the fourth picture. Surprised

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Re: Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by Ham701 on Mon Jun 15, 2009 8:12 pm

How does he look like the Sith in The Old Republic trailer? This is a Givin Dark Jedi, and that sith had a mask.

Anyways, I didn't like it, As Sial and Alpha said, way overdone with the blurs, and the fight was, ehhhh, boring.
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Re: Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by Commando Shade on Mon Jun 15, 2009 8:49 pm

Blurs were bad, but I have a question. Why on Earth would there be less than five clones on the gunship? There are also no clones dead on the ground, so don't say the rest had died.

*Awkward* <.<

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Re: Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by Zepher on Mon Jun 15, 2009 9:23 pm

80-0 wrote:And isn't it odd how in the first and second picture I didn't notice the Dark Jedi at all? He would've cut those clones to bits and pieces, if he's as strong as he appears to be by the fourth picture. Surprised


There is a reason for that my good sir! This Dark Jedi enjoys taking things slow.

As for the clones Shade... they didn't come from the Gunship. You see, they were already there! The Gunship clones are dead, assumably.

As for the Blur. Ugh. Agree with all of you. I still haven't found a blur effect that I'm happy with.
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Re: Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by Jedi Joe on Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:17 pm

The fire could use a slight blur. The story is tolerable, but those motion blur effects are awful! Please do something better next time! Waaa!
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Re: Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by Gerrard on Tue Jun 16, 2009 3:04 am

Pretty good, but I think that the blur effect is used a bit too much. Though I like the action and the plot. I think it could have been a bit longer, but again very nicely done!
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Re: Epsiode 11 - Part 1

Post by astoriabluelegos on Tue Jun 16, 2009 9:30 pm

Great comic, thoroughly enjoyed it. And the effects were great. Awesome work my nemesis. Wink Blue Arc
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