You first part I
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Troopa Daisy
wrecks
Knight
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You first part I
I thought of some new ideas for some mocs. They will be called the ''you first'' mocs. These are all going to be 8x8 vigs. In this moc two 80th legion troops found a data chip that needs to be taken to their base. Along the way one of them dropped it in lava. This is on mustafar, and the next will be either on hoth, or kashyyyk.
Main pic.
The clone reaching for the data chip.
The vig.
C@C are welcome.
Main pic.
The clone reaching for the data chip.
The vig.
C@C are welcome.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
- Location : Anywhere with lego.
Re: You first part I
The lava looks pretty good, but maybe try blending the colours a little better, they seem a bit jumbled. The walkway isn't as great, I'm not liking the hand rails. The minifig positioning looks a tad awkward...
wrecks- Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : B.C. Canada
Re: You first part I
This is just way too simple. More stuff should be added on the sides or something.
Re: You first part I
wrecks wrote:The lava looks pretty good, but maybe try blending the colours a little better, they seem a bit jumbled. The walkway isn't as great, I'm not liking the hand rails. The minifig positioning looks a tad awkward...
Thanks wrecks. I tried getting the lava so it wasn't just a line of yellow, ect. But I will try to make the lava less jumbled though. Also should I just redo the whole walkway, or just fix the rails?
Knight- VIP Former Staff
- Location : Anywhere with lego.
Re: You first part I
I totaly agree with Troopa Daisy. This is way to small. You need to add a big platform, and maybe make a big building. It's just kinda boring with this tiny set. (If you just don't have enough lego's to do what I'm recemending, I understand.) He droped it in lava! What a clumsy clone!
Cobra- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 25
Re: You first part I
No offense, but do you know what MOC stands for? It's just a little annoying with you saying set so much.
Hazard with a Glove- Guild Member
- Age : 27
Location : Once upon a time, in a magical forrest....
Re: You first part I
Actually no, I don't know what it stands for. And don't really care. I think it's a set and I don't see any problem with calling it that. But if you don't like it I will Call it a MOC. So there.Hazard with a Glove wrote:No offense, but do you know what MOC stands for? It's just a little annoying with you saying set so much.
Cobra- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 25
Re: You first part I
I don't mean to be rude, it's just that a set would be something made by TLC and a MOC by a civilian.
Hazard with a Glove- Guild Member
- Age : 27
Location : Once upon a time, in a magical forrest....
Re: You first part I
Oh come on, chill, he's a new member, you can't expect him to know everything right away.
Re: You first part I
I know, I know. And actually Cobra you seem like a really good member.
Hazard with a Glove- Guild Member
- Age : 27
Location : Once upon a time, in a magical forrest....
Re: You first part I
Hazard with a Glove wrote:I know, I know. And actually Cobra you seem like a really good member.
Thank you, and sorry for the sarcasim. And thanks Troopa Daisy for helping me feel welcome.
Cobra- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 25
Re: You first part I
No offence, but it looks like the clone behind him is going to butt-hump him. Good besides that.
Cpt Rex- Non-Guild Member
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Re: You first part I
Cpt Rex wrote:No offence, but it looks like the clone behind him is going to butt-hump him. Good besides that.
A tad awkward indeed...
I've found that working on a plate, as opposed to SNOT, for lava is a lot easier and has better results. You might want to give that a shot next time.
Axel- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : Australia
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