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That's funny you say that because I just found a crap ton of yellow pieces in my basement earlier. Good idea!

DeltaRecon226 wrote:That's funny you say that because I just found a crap ton of yellow pieces in my basement earlier. Good idea!

Only add one accent color since your using two bleys. This is a great start. Through some unique wings on this man! Its like a dart. Now make it a starFIGHTER!

I like it a lot. The sleek look is very good .

I won't have anything up today as I'm pretty busy but I'll get it finished tomorrow. With wings, I'm hoping this thing is guild worthy.

Some sort of command center on Kamino. I know there is stuff to edit, but I can't think of anything. Please feel free to give any sort of constructive criticism.

Cool, I see you've been inspired by my Kamino vig. It's actually very good (especially the translucent parts), but what I would do is take away one of the crates, and like I did on mine, make the big control panel very unifrom and Kamino-esque, it's a little crowded. The photo is blurry, but in this case it looks cool because it captures the action. Remember to take the shot with a background poster though, or LEGO baseplates. 4.25/5. Good work, indeed.

AlphaDelta052-Can I suggest adding in two curving (Use different slops to give it that look) white walls to give it a Kamino feel to it.

Maybe a pic will help?

Also Kaminoans are very OCD. Make ya'lls mocs like that.

And most importantly, sort out your photography !

I haven't made alot of progress due to schoolwork , but I have made a nice looking fin, and the cockpit can now fit a minifigure, unlike before. If possible, do any of you have experience SNOTing wings, because that is what's been making this build kinda hard. Also, I've decieded against implementing a third color because it looks better with the two tone.

Thanks,

Delta

Custom Halo Hornet. Give any sort of constructive feedback.


Another 16 X 16 MOC.

The interior is nice, and I like the use of cockpits as the rotors, but I would like to see it more SNOT'd.

Do you think I should SNOT the top part?

Hey guys just another update on the hornet.

Do not double post. Please read the rules before posting again.

I'm really liking your hornet, but two things. Firstly, take better pictures. The background is distracting and I have trouble seeing the details. Secondly, take out the yellow. Try to find another color that flows better with the moc, or add more yellow so that it doesn't look so random. Other than that, try to make it smoother and like fithboy said the part usage on the engines is great. Overall, pretty good. I like it alot.

Hey guys this is an update on my 32x32 MOC.

Wow! This is a great improvement on the photography! The front of the base looks really good, but I'm not too much a fan of the swamp area. The tree looks too blocky an, there isn't enough vegetation or water.

Terrain update.

The base is spot on, no work needed there, and the tree is very good. But you may need to texture the terrain more instead of just slapping on grass pieces.

If for some reason simply you can't do a lush environment due to parts restrictions, I suggest building over the baseplate to create an urban environment. All you need is a ton of bley tiles to create a street or the like.

This is one of my starter MOCs. Please leave comments and say what I should improve on.

Military Tank

Star Wars tank


This is a random star wars fighter that I made. Please comment on this.



Don't double post. Posts merged. ~JU

First, don't double post. Second, I can't see the pictures. Maybe something is wrong with me, but I think it is on your end.

Ok. Get a photo hosting site. I suggest using Flickr. (The bold is a link) You are using a mail service and unless you want to give us your username and password on your mail account we can't see the pics. Flickr is free too!

hey guys, Hows it going? here's a New project that WILL be completed in real life one way or another (not like the last one) Here it is!