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Although I am not sure what it is, it looks ok. Keep going. I'd like to see more.

(Btw do you plan on buying that many brown flower stems? If so your insane... :p )

If it's a war scene then it's looking good. Now it needs a tank.

I suggest some more slopes and cheese clopes on the destroyed building, and more terrain on the areas where the road+structure is not.

jamesuniverse wrote:Although I am not sure what it is, it looks ok. Keep going. I'd like to see more.

(Btw do you plan on buying that many brown flower stems? If so your insane... :p )

I am going for middle easterny look, and yes I am actually going to buy that many stems, remember, I'm the crazy one here

Fithboy wrote:If it's a war scene then it's looking good. Now it needs a tank.

I was personally thinking Humvee, but that's not bad either I will add more to the opposite side of the road and thre slopes to the building rubble.
Thanks Guys!

So you plan on spending $50+ on stems and not on other parts? Doesn't make sense to me. Those things are $1+ each on BL and at high quantities they are even more expensive.

are they really a dollar a piece? seems dispraportional. I was thinking PAB if it still is functional...hmm ill have to look farther...

a43 wrote:are they really a dollar a piece? seems dispraportional. I was thinking PAB if it still is functional...hmm ill have to look farther...

PAB sells green ones. Brown ones are from the cloud city set (and maybe another) and are very pricey and rare.

Sorry if this is considered a doube post but I have Progress on the opposite side, I added a wall and used what I think is the Rock Texture Technique.


Thanks James, alright then.. I will make a river to accommodate for The price of brown plastic

Not a double post, but you missed a period and didn't capitalize your "S". Don't sweat it though, I fixed it. -CJ

That looks nice. A tank or humvee would look cool. Make sure you add figs in the real thing

I think there is a little too much color variation in the wall, a little is good, but that is a little too much.

Not a double post, but you missed a period and didn't capitalize your "S". Don't sweat it though, I fixed it. -CJ

Silly grammer nazis
Hummvee and figs will be included in final product.

Sorry man, I couldn't resist. -CJ

a43 wrote:

Not a double post, but you missed a period and didn't capitalize your "S". Don't sweat it though, I fixed it. -CJ

silly grammer nazis
Hummvee and figs will be included in final product

Not meant to go off topic, but C.J. Come on..... You type in liek dis in the guild :p

Try to get as many physical MOCs out there. Even small stuff can be made awesome.

It is looking good so far, I really like that technique on the wall.

jamesuniverse wrote:

a43 wrote:

Not a double post, but you missed a period and didn't capitalize your "S". Don't sweat it though, I fixed it. -CJ

silly grammer nazis
Hummvee and figs will be included in final product

Not meant to go off topic, but C.J. Come on..... You type in liek dis in the guild :p

Try to get as many physical MOCs out there. Even small stuff can be made awesome.

Which is why I told him not to sweat it. If I had wanted to correct him, I would have said go read the rules again. But I didn't, I did it more as a playful nudge than anything.

Ladies, no need for the hates! Just jokes and fun. If he was going to correct me, he would have not put goofy emoticons in his "boss man green" corrections
anyways, scene change! (an accommodation for the price of brown plastic)

It still needs more layers.

Color? Height?

a43 wrote: Color? Height?

I bet he means layering. Check out some of my larger MOCs or Kashyyyk for large scale layering.

jamesuniverse wrote:

a43 wrote: Color? Height?

I bet he means layering. Check out some of my larger MOCs or Kashyyyk for large scale layering.

Both. But more height than coloring.

Definitely more height difference.